Wanted: character development
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Avyra
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Wanted: character development
Av is in a slump. I'm killing her off at the end of the year if she can't get out of it; she really won't be that missed.
But I can't seem to get her out of it. I'm frankly the worst writer here and I can't write anything character wise that's interesting for people to read or creative or engaging or anything. Her issues are beyond my level. I've made a disliked and hard to play with character.
I want threads that could maybe boost her self esteem. Something that's an actual plot thread, not just a pep talk.
But I can't seem to get her out of it. I'm frankly the worst writer here and I can't write anything character wise that's interesting for people to read or creative or engaging or anything. Her issues are beyond my level. I've made a disliked and hard to play with character.
I want threads that could maybe boost her self esteem. Something that's an actual plot thread, not just a pep talk.
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Leala
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Re: Wanted: character development
Maybe she could help Abby out with a problem? We've been meaning to write a thread with Av and Torianin, anyway. 

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Avyra
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Re: Wanted: character development
I'm not sure if fluff would be the best for her. All of her threads right now are pretty fluffy anyway.
Possibly, pm me any ideas.
Possibly, pm me any ideas.
- Jenn
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Re: Wanted: character development
Zeen would be very sad if she died. I'm working on replies!

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Sunny
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Re: Wanted: character development
I don't think I understand your definition of fluff. If you explained what you think is fluff versus what is "real" perhaps people can help more.
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Avyra
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Re: Wanted: character development
For me fluff is like... this thread is kinda here but it doesn't progress her storyline.
- Jenn
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Re: Wanted: character development
*tilts head* But if you're not sure where Av is going with the threads she's involved in, how do you know that it won't end up advancing/becoming important/being plain fun for her storyline?

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Leala
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Re: Wanted: character development
What goals do you have in mind for her, character/personality wise? (Trying to think of ideas)

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Avyra
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Re: Wanted: character development
I don't know. I'm just tired.
I want her to go back to herself when she began. Heck, even better. I just need her out of this.
I want her to go back to herself when she began. Heck, even better. I just need her out of this.
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